PENS OF PRAISE March Meeting

 

PENS OF PRAISE

Christian Writers Group

Next meeting…

Saturday, March, 8   at 10:00 a.m. – 12:00 p.m.

at

Faith Church

2201  42^nd Street, Manitowoc, WI  54220

§   Faith Church is located next to Festival Foods

§   Not far from the Manitowoc exit off Interstate 43

During our March meeting we will explore the topic of page turning chapter endings, taught by Susan Kinney.

Our featured author who inspired this lesson is Sharon Dunn. She taught an excellent class at an ACFW Conference on this very topic. Sharon Dunn writes romantic suspense and humorous mysteries. Please look Sharon up on sharondunnbooks.net. She shares links, her books, and a writer’s corner at this WEB address. Sharron is an award winning playwright and short story writer.

Our prompt for March is: Write your excellent ending. Whether you write poetry, a one page short story, or article, please experiment on your ending. Use surprise, a question, or vow or anything your imagination can run with, which makes your reader long for more!

Warning you may end up loving to write!

Pens of Praise Christian Writers Group sponsored the Bulamu Mama Children’s Village Essay Contest. These orphans from Uganda spilled their hearts on the pages  for the prompt, “How I Will Change the World.” These young men and women were such a blessing to those of us who read their generous thoughts. Thank you to all who participated with judging and or financing this contest. THANK YOU to all who were involved!

Visit a local shop and bring your coffee or cappuccino with you.

Let us know if you’re attending so we can save a seat just for you.

We look forward to seeing you there! May God bless you richly and always as you write for His glory!



PENS OF PRAISE February Meeting

Pens of Praise

Christian Writers Group

Next meeting…

Saturday, February 8th  at 10:00 a.m. – 12:00 p.m.

at

Faith Church

2201  42^nd Street, Manitowoc, WI  54220

§   Faith Church is located next to Festival Foods

§   Not far from the Manitowoc exit off Interstate 43

 

Our prompt for February is:

Dreams of great deeds are only dreams unless you…

We invite you to share a five minute sample of your work in progress. Pens is a safe, friendly environment. You are not required to bring writings to attend the meeting.

We may share a book report on a novel or a “how to” for writing!

Warning you may end up loving to write!

Pens is sponsoring the Bulamu Mama Essay Contest for the youth who live in Bulamu Mama Children’s orphanage in Uganda. All who wish to participate with judging the twenty essays for the FEBRUARY MEETING will pre-read them and then pick out their top three favorites. At the meeting we will read the favored essays and then vote for first, second, and third prize winners.

For whatever time is left over we will allow those who want to share their work in progress with our group. This is a safe place to share and grow!

ATTENTION: Let Debby Erdmann know if you are interested in judging these essays at theerdmanns@msn.com .

Visit a local shop or bring your coffee or cappuccino with you.

Let us know if you’re attending so we can save a seat just for you.If you have questions or concerns call Becky McLafferty at (920)758-9196 or e-mail her at mclafferty@lakefield.net or call Susan Kinney at (920)242-3631 or e-mail her at susanmarlenekinney@gmail.com.

We look forward to seeing you there! May God bless you richly and always as you write for His glory!

BABY ON THE WAY!

What a blessed and busy year has passed. One of our most precious highlights from 2013 was learning that our granddaughter would be born in February of 2014! The clock is ticking and we will meet her soon!

 



This is our daughter, Vanessa, with a baby on the way. These are some of the photos of us setting up for the baby shower. Vanessa had found the idea for the 'Mother to Bee 'shower on Pintrest. She and I did the shopping for black tablecloths and coloful yellow napkins etc. and thankfully she is a wonderful bargain hunter and planner. We had our doubts as to how this would all look, but she has the vision to see how an event will turn out. As we were setting up we all teased her about the black tablecloths of course!
I’m not just saying this because she is my daughter, but this was the most beautiful shower I’ve ever attended!



 It was mid November when we held a shower at Country Memories Farm. My friend, Becky McLafferty, was very accommodating concerning every detail! A huge blessing and surprise was when our oldest daughter, Jackie and her friend Heather and my youngest grandson Donavin arrived in time to help set up and celebrate with us!

  

I did tell Jackie that these photos were going on line! I just couldn’t resist! sticking these in!  

 

 

 

 Here are my two beautiful daughters and me sharing a laugh!

 

Everyone was such a blessing! Generous hearts and fun communications mingled during the entire event! A lot of laughter and chit chat!

 

 

The games were fun, everything from the candybars in the diapers to pennys at each plate. We drew a prize for the year on the winning penny. We had wooden blocks at the tables for names ideas for the baby. Table groups had only the blocks from their table to work with to make a list of baby girl names. People actually did pretty well!

All in all it was a splended time with splended people for a splended purpose!

 

Pens of Praise

Christin Writers Group

Saturday, December 14, 2013

10:00 am – 12:00 pm

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Faith Church

2201  42^nd Street, Manitowoc, WI  54220

§   Faith Church is located next to Festival Foods

§   Not far from the Manitowoc exit off Interstate 43

 

Debby Erdmann will share the devotion. Kathy Leist is bringing the desert.

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This meeting will be expressly different from our regular monthly structure. Pens has sponsored the Bulamu Mama Essay Contest for the youth who live in this orphanage in Uganda. All who wish to participate with judging the twenty essays will pre-read them and then pick out their top three favorites. At the meeting we will read the favored essays and then vote for first, second, and third prize winners. Immediately after the vote, if time permits, we will share our own short story or work in progress.(Approximately five minutes per person so that everyone has a chance to share.)  Reading your writing with the group is not required to attend the meeting.

 

ATTENTION: Anyone wishing to judge the entries must contact Debby Erdmann in order to receive the Bulamu essays. You may reach her at theerdmanns@msn.com

Thank you!

 

We may also share a book report on a novel or a “how to” for writing!

 

 Warning you may end up loving to write!

Visit a local shop or bring your coffee or cappuccino with you.

Let us know if you’re attending so we can save a seat just for you.

 

We look forward to seeing you there! May God bless you richly and always as you write for His glory!

Short Story

By Susan Marlene Kinney

Pens of Praise Devotion      November 9, 2013

 

And the Word became flesh and dwelt among us, and we beheld His glory, the glory as of the only begotten of the Father, full of grace and truth. John 1: 14 NKJV

When I turn the crinkling pages of my New King James Bible, I watch Jesus inspire and lead the masses. His down to earth tales finger the hearts of His listeners as He weaves their experience and understanding of day to day existence, into eternal patterns and focus. Jesus used truth principles in the power of story to bring their, and our, understanding over the bridge spanning the gap between heaven and earth.

Other names like Abraham, Joseph, Esther, Job, Matthew, and Peter, bring to mind biblical happenings, words which paint the picture of courage, faith, and overcoming. These important collections of wisdom and mishaps warm my blood with hope and longing.

They pave the way to relationship with Christ and our ultimate survival with Him.

 

An Old Testament hero, whom I treasure, is Joseph. In the beginning of Joseph’s story, his prophetic dream gave him a glimpse of what was to come. Life for Joseph unfolded in a completely different direction than he’d expected. In spite of not understanding why the many trials and separation from his family happened, Joseph remained faithful to the knowledge that God was God. Joseph persevered through each challenge and disappointment until he was fit to be trusted by God to save many from starvation. Near the end of his story he answered his brothers’ fear with all the love and courage of a man who knows his God. Joseph speaks to them and says, “Do not be afraid, for am I in the place of God? But as for you, you meant evil against me; but God meant it for good…Now therefore do not be afraid, I will provide for you and your little ones.” And he comforted them and spoke kindly to them. Genesis 50:19 – 21

 

Funny how after a trial, when we have held faithfully to the grace of the Lord, we see the why or the meaningfulness of our troubled circumstances.

 And we are glad!

We’ve become someone we never knew we could.

 

Stories internalize themselves into our thoughts and pattern how we view the world and our circumstances. The Bible is God’s love letter to us and a roadmap, which can lead the way through brambles and weeds of difficulty, so that we can follow the footsteps of Jesus. He is the Author and Finisher of our Faith. I invite you to peruse the short stories in the Bible. Cleave to their truth to gain strength, peace, and joy for your journey. The rich reality of these biblical men and women’s circumstances, though they happened decades ago, have touched my steps and bent my decisions to follow paths less traveled by.

 

So, you say that you have a story? What experience can you share, which can melt the wearing lies, deceptions, and discouragement shouldering the perception of your potential readers?

 

 

PENS OF PRAISE NOVEMBER MEETING

Pens of Praise

Christian Writers Group

 

Next meeting…

Saturday, November, 9^th   at 10:00 a.m. – 12:00 p.m.

at

Faith Church

2201  42^nd Street, Manitowoc, WI  54220

§   Faith Church is located next to Festival Foods

§   Not far from the Manitowoc exit off Interstate 43

 
We shall explore the adventures of writing short stories at our November meeting. Susan Kinney will present information on gleaning ideas and plotting a short story for either your own personal enjoyment or for publication.

We will also discuss different opportunities for short story pieces.

 

Our prompt is “Abundance or Lack Thereof”

The prompt may be written in the genre you are familiar with: poetry, short story, article, or memoir. Or you can challenge yourself and write in a different genre altogether. You are not required to write to the prompt, but I’m sure you will enjoy yourself more if you do. We are a safe place where you can share and enjoy others, who entertain or minister by the glide of their pens.

 

We will also share healthy boundaries for our Pens readings. Sometimes a writer is uncertain about sharing the content of their latest work in progress. I recently read A Novel Idea Best Advice on Writing Inspirational Fiction, a Tyndale book, written by many top notch writers. This book suggests many excellent guidelines’. Quoting page 212, Closing the Bedroom Door by Terri Blackstok states: When you write a Christian novel, you make an implied covenant with your readers to give them a clean story, one that doesn’t put a stumbling block before them.

 

We invite you to bring a short five minute sample of your WIP, or what we call your work in progress. But, that is only if you desire to share it in a safe, friendly environment. You are not required to bring writings to attend the meeting.

We may share a book report on a novel or a “how to” for writing!

 Warning you may end up loving to write!

Remember to visit a local shop or bring your coffee or cappuccino with you.

Let us know if you are attending so we can save a seat just for you.

We look forward to seeing you there! May God bless you richly and always as you write for His glory!

 

 

My All-Time Favorite Antagonist Taught Me…

My All-Time Favorite Antagonist Taught Me…

For Pens of Praise Prompt–By Susan Marlene Kinney

October 12, 2013

 

Worthy antagonists such as Darth Vader, Sylvester the cat, and Carry Grant’s sweet old aunts in Arsenic and Old Lace, danced and flirted with the curser on my computer screen. Though they were all excellent choices to write about, for our Pens of Praise October prompt, only one antagonist truly captured my fascination. She irritates and fascinates me, but also makes me chuckle.

This antagonist may remind you of a next door neighbor, a relative or fellow worker. But, let’s hope not. Between pages 80-83 of a certain book, which I will name later, are the insufferable, irritating characteristics of my memorable antagonist. Let’s do a rundown of her particular qualities.  She is needy, demanding, sharp tongued and full of sarcasm— just to begin with. Did I mention controlling and cheap concerning everything in the household? She can’t bear any noise or a breath of fresh air and she certainly never smiles. In fact, the protagonist in this book finds herself, “wondering what would happen to her face if she did smile.” This antagonist acts like a hypochondriac, waking her daughter each hour at night with demands, since she sleeps during the day. She constantly complains about those who help her the most, making the tender of heart feel that they are never… enough. She is not easily influenced to another opinion and she uses the guilt card whenever she can, to control other people’s choices. She accuses the innocent of ulterior motives and crushes any joy or pleasant musings with her sour, grating words—

What? I ask. Are you begging me to stop already, before I tell you how suspicious and meddling…

Okay, I could go on about her crusty character, except I’d run out of white space.

You have just met Mrs. Gibson straight from the pages of Anne of Windy Poplars, or from the movie Anne of Avonlea, a character created by L. M. Montgomery

When I list Mrs. Gibson’s characteristics, all I see is how unlovely and unlikeable she is.  Yet, when I observe her greatest stab at manipulation toward her daughter, which include the silent treatment, refusing to eat, and seeming to holding back forgiveness before she passes, she speaks up to say something that melts my heart. She tells Anne, “If you’ve managed to get Pauline to accept that Isaac Kent, you’ve accomplished more than I thought was humanly possible. I think we shant have to climb down and tell him to take her.” Though her ways are demeaning and destructive, I start to believe that this negative woman is actually trying to strengthen her weak willed, passive daughter.

What have I learned from this lady? I’ve learned how entertaining the power of control is for some individuals and that when someone is selfishness and demeaning that I can respond in a way that is honorable and life-giving, if I use a little creativity. I’ve learned not to despise this type of person, but to somehow find it within me to pity or pray over their heart condition. Last of all, I’ve learned to not allow them to control me, like Pauline did for so long. Thank goodness she does overcome, in spite of her mother’s mind games! When I see that spark of amusement in Mrs. Gibson’s eyes each time Pauline finally speaks out, I think to myself, maybe Pauline’s mother does have a heart with a freckle of love beating in her breast after all!

 

ANTAGONIST WANTA-BE

 

 

Antagonist Wanta-be

By Susan Marlene Kinney

Pens of Praise Devotion, October 12, 2013

 

That would be me, an antagonist wanta-be! I want to be like my FATHER IN HEAVEN, for HE fosters life … For instance, in the book of Romans, in a passage, which speaks of Abraham being our father, the Scripture reads…

God who gives life to the dead and calls those things which do not exist as though they did, who contrary to hope, in hope believed, so that he became the father of many nations according to what was spoken, “So shall your descendants be.” Romans 4:17

In the movie ‘Les Miserables,’ Javert, Montreuil’s police chief, is passionate about keeping the law, but he is actually Jean Valjean’s antagonist. I suppose, in a similar way, I want to be the devils antagonist. I want to speak life and not death. I want to pray interruption and destruction to the devils plans. I want to encourage and strengthen my brothers and sisters in Christ.

 I want to be a part of rescuing those who feel unworthy of God’s favor by bringing them into the truth and light of the father’s love for them.

The Lord says about the wicked, “You use your mouth for evil and harness your tongue to deceit.” Aren’t we to bring the opposite, to displace Satan’s wickedness? I want to harness my mouth for life, purity, and to keep my tongue from evil. In the movie, ‘Les Miserables,’ the government’s faulty system treated the innocent like Cosett unjustly and also harshly treated those who stole bread because they were starving. No forgiveness or opportunity could be found for Cosett’s mother. This movie represents to me a system of law without grace without love without godly truth.

How do we prevent ourselves from such error and coldness of heart? “My heart says of you, ‘Seek his face!’ Your face, LORD, will I seek.” Psalms 27:8. And also, “Look to the LORD and his strength; seek his face always.” Psalms 105:4

It’s up to us to meditate and ponder the word of God, because no one can do that for us. Our father made us in HIS image. How joyful HE must be when we resemble HIS goodness, kindness, grace and love when life tosses its worst at us. We are his ambassadors. How about this new thought— we can be the Antagonistic Ambassadors of the LORD Most High!

That is the title I would be honored to embrace.

Oh Lord, your kindness penetrates the deepest darkest holes. You are unwavering with unconditional love, grace, and holiness. Help me to be you willing antagonistic ambassador who is successful in thwarting the plans and evil intentions of the devil and his minions. I asked this day for a natural flair of bringing your grace to the graceless, your patience to the inpatient and generosity to greedy. Help me to represent purity in a way that is not legalistic but is instead life-giving.

As Jesus prayed, “Our FATHER in heaven, hallowed be YOUR name, YOUR kingdom come, YOUR will be done on earth as it is in heaven…

 

*The very next day after our Pens meeting, we had a guest speaker at church.  Guess what Pastor Andy Shanholtz spoke about.....Well the title of his sermon was "The Labels We Wear!" I've ever thrilled with our Lord!  Sorry about the photo I couldn't think of anything else that would represent antagonisgts any better! LOL!

 

Pens of praise

Christian Writers Group

Next meeting…

Saturday, October 12th   10:00 am – 12:00 pm

at

Faith Church

2201  42^nd Street, Manitowoc, WI  54220

§   Faith Church is located next to Festival Foods

§   Not far from the Manitowoc exit off Interstate 43

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The teaching for October is Antagonists who needs them? We do!

Susan Kinney is supplying the teaching for this enlightening lesson on those characters we love to hate and how we can know their purpose.

Our prompt is, “My FAVORITE all time antagonists taught me…..” Yes dear writer you fill in the blank!

                                              

Keep in mind these teachings can sharpen and improve the skills needed for many genres. You are welcome to bring your latest work in progress for a five-minute reading, but this is not required to attend the meeting.

 

Remember to visit one of our local shops and bring your coffee or cappuccino with you. Let us know if you’re attending so we can save a seat just for you.

For those who can attend the October meeting - we look forward to seeing you there! May God bless you richly and always as you write for His glory!

Pampered Chef and the Girls Night Out!

Pampered Chef has a wonderful plan for the ladies of the house to enjoy a night out with the girls...cooking and chatting and laughing together!  It is NOT a Pampered chef party where you have the saleslady showing off product. In fact there are no salesladies present. I have one opinion and one alone for this idea. "Brilliant" these evenings are truly the creation of some master mind somewhere!

You see, the hostess plans and buys dinner for all ten ladies. (One month out of the year for each lady.)  Then the rest of us show up and pay $16.00 which the hostess uses to choose almost $160.00 of wonderful Pampered Chef products. (No I'm not a Pampered Chef saleslady!) The hostess is organized and has the recipes and ingredients out for all of us to use. So we get talking...no cooking....okay talking and laughing.....Awwwwweeee....eventually we get to the cooking and we use paper plates or plastic throw away plates....

Well,  I couldn't be more pleased with these evenings! Men can fish and hunt all they want, but a night out like this, cooking with my buddies, and eating a great meal, can't be compared to anything else!  Our lady, Jennifer Colchado, set us up with this wonderful, ideal program, and my friends and my daughter and I are bonding and loving our time together....not to mention the delicious foods as we all try to outdo one another in the kitchen....Just kidding!

It is all fun and fellowship for us girls! Jennifer has connected with us from Florida as we are enjoying ourselves from the wilds of Wisconsin! Thank you Jennifer! We appreciate you!!!!

Jennifer Colchado
Pampered Chef
Independent Consultant
321-303-3082
www.pamperedchef.biz/jennlcol